Friday, 5 July 2013

Lost in your world

Lost in your world
Lost in the colors, in the fragrance, in your arms
Lost in the magic, in your world, in your charms

I dance on the petals and fly in the breeze
I breathe in each moment, each moment to freeze
Your world is exquisite, audacious and pure

Each color is valiant, each color demure



Your touch as bold as the orange hue
Your caress as soft as the subtle blue
I tip toe around and soak in each sight
Hopping on green, yellow and white
You spin me around to show me more
I see from your eyes the heavens galore

Eager to lose, in a quest to win
Glowing in red, burning in pink
Time has stopped, life has stopped
Each moment in your world,
Is a life time unfurled
My life lost in your life
My world lost in your world
Lost in the orange, white, pink and green

Found in the flush, blush, subtle and serene

Written for Toads

Image credit :Pixabay

41 comments:

  1. Oh, your rhymes are exquisite and I just love how you brought emotional meaning to the colors...beautiful work!! Thank you for taking part in the challenge! :)

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    1. Thanks so much Hannah!! Loved the prompt :)

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  2. I felt like a little bee singing a love song to a flower.A Beautiful picture.

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  3. Colorfully and poetically wonderful. Love the pictures.

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  4. I love how you turned the colors of tulips into the blush of a cheek, the timeless romance. This was lush with both shades and emotions. Lovely! Amy (PS, my first time here, so thanks for posting to Real Toads!)

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    1. Hey dear, thanks so much for a wonderful comment :)

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  5. Hi,
    I adored the colors, the rhythm, the rhyme and the words were sublime.

    Such a delightful journey to visit your work.

    Thanks,

    Bobbi Purvis aka Barbara

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    1. Purvis, thanks so much for such wonderful words :)

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  6. I so enjoyed this filled with vibrant color and warmth. I had to read it twice as it was so nice.

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    1. Awww thanks Truedessa..soo much :)

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  7. I am lost in your gorgeous poem!
    :D
    Lovely~

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  8. I became lost in your beautiful poem, the lovely rhyme.

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    1. Thanks so much Helen for a lovely comment :)

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  9. That last line just sums the whole poem up and carries me away! Nice.

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  10. This is just beautiful...turning all the colors into connection with love.

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  11. how much do i praise your work .. words seem to be falling short everytime .. super creative you are for sure .. the way you weaved the rainbow of love to make it all the more colourful to the eyes of heart.. explainable , Sfurti !!

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    1. Awwww you are so so generous with your praise everytime. Thanks so much dear!

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  12. Superb composition.A crush for colors make a rush for poetry.

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  13. Sfurti, your poems are absolutely beautiful. :)

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  14. Sfurti, your poems are absolutely beautiful. :)

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  15. Beautiful verses esp the flow - keep writing and do keep in touch :)

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    1. Thanks Uma :).Yes let's keep in touch :)

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  16. Sfurti, just one word......................... awesome :)

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  17. Kaleidoscope of colours ... loved this, simple, easy to read and colourful

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  18. What a lovely, dancing poem. The colors, the rhythm and the perfectly balanced words make this is a real treat.

    More power to your pen...

    Dagny

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    1. Thanks so much Dagny..such wonderful words!!!

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