Friday, 5 July 2013

Lost in your world

Lost in your world
Lost in the colors, in the fragrance, in your arms
Lost in the magic, in your world, in your charms

I dance on the petals and fly in the breeze
I breathe in each moment, each moment to freeze
Your world is exquisite, audacious and pure

Each color is valiant, each color demure



Your touch as bold as the orange hue
Your caress as soft as the subtle blue
I tip toe around and soak in each sight
Hopping on green, yellow and white
You spin me around to show me more
I see from your eyes the heavens galore

Eager to lose, in a quest to win
Glowing in red, burning in pink
Time has stopped, life has stopped
Each moment in your world,
Is a life time unfurled
My life lost in your life
My world lost in your world
Lost in the orange, white, pink and green

Found in the flush, blush, subtle and serene

Written for Toads

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39 comments:

  1. Unknown5 July 2013 at 03:50

    Beautiful

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  2. Hannah5 July 2013 at 05:15

    Oh, your rhymes are exquisite and I just love how you brought emotional meaning to the colors...beautiful work!! Thank you for taking part in the challenge! :)

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    1. Unknown5 July 2013 at 05:19

      Thanks so much Hannah!! Loved the prompt :)

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  3. Sini Rachel5 July 2013 at 06:48

    I felt like a little bee singing a love song to a flower.A Beautiful picture.

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  4. RasmaSandra5 July 2013 at 08:11

    Colorfully and poetically wonderful. Love the pictures.

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  5. Sharp Little Pencil5 July 2013 at 12:19

    I love how you turned the colors of tulips into the blush of a cheek, the timeless romance. This was lush with both shades and emotions. Lovely! Amy (PS, my first time here, so thanks for posting to Real Toads!)

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    1. Unknown5 July 2013 at 22:05

      Hey dear, thanks so much for a wonderful comment :)

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  6. Barbara Purvis Hunter5 July 2013 at 13:14

    Hi,
    I adored the colors, the rhythm, the rhyme and the words were sublime.

    Such a delightful journey to visit your work.

    Thanks,

    Bobbi Purvis aka Barbara

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    1. Unknown5 July 2013 at 22:06

      Purvis, thanks so much for such wonderful words :)

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  7. Truedessa5 July 2013 at 19:02

    I so enjoyed this filled with vibrant color and warmth. I had to read it twice as it was so nice.

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  8. Ella6 July 2013 at 09:36

    I am lost in your gorgeous poem!
    :D
    Lovely~

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  9. Helen6 July 2013 at 11:23

    I became lost in your beautiful poem, the lovely rhyme.

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    1. Unknown6 July 2013 at 11:25

      Thanks so much Helen for a lovely comment :)

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  10. Margaret6 July 2013 at 12:51

    That last line just sums the whole poem up and carries me away! Nice.

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  11. Susie Clevenger6 July 2013 at 16:38

    This is just beautiful...turning all the colors into connection with love.

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  12. Anonymous23 July 2013 at 01:03

    how much do i praise your work .. words seem to be falling short everytime .. super creative you are for sure .. the way you weaved the rainbow of love to make it all the more colourful to the eyes of heart.. explainable , Sfurti !!

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    1. Unknown23 July 2013 at 01:13

      Awwww you are so so generous with your praise everytime. Thanks so much dear!

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  13. Anonymous23 July 2013 at 01:07

    A Colorful Poem...Lovely.. :-)

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  14. Easwar Arumugam23 July 2013 at 02:12

    Superb composition.A crush for colors make a rush for poetry.

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  15. Unknown23 July 2013 at 02:19

    Sfurti, your poems are absolutely beautiful. :)

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  16. Unknown23 July 2013 at 02:19

    Sfurti, your poems are absolutely beautiful. :)

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  17. Uma Anandane23 July 2013 at 02:31

    Beautiful verses esp the flow - keep writing and do keep in touch :)

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    1. Unknown23 July 2013 at 08:47

      Thanks Uma :).Yes let's keep in touch :)

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  18. Vanish Girl23 July 2013 at 08:25

    Sfurti, just one word......................... awesome :)

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  19. Rohan Kachalia24 July 2013 at 01:50

    Just brilliant!!!

    Dropping by Writing on the go

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  20. Ritu24 July 2013 at 02:46

    Kaleidoscope of colours ... loved this, simple, easy to read and colourful

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  21. Anonymous24 July 2013 at 08:34

    What a lovely, dancing poem. The colors, the rhythm and the perfectly balanced words make this is a real treat.

    More power to your pen...

    Dagny

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    1. Unknown24 July 2013 at 10:44

      Thanks so much Dagny..such wonderful words!!!

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