Tuesday, 12 August 2014

Reunion


The urge to reunite with her core was stronger today. Siya knew she didn’t belong here; her true self was inside. With a swift motion she dug the knife inside her and touched her bones. She reached the skeleton of what she was. She will never be incomplete again. 







Image Credit here

24 comments:

  1. Gruesome yet poignant! What imagination you possess Sfu!

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  2. Sfoo is on a roll. And I am loving every bit of it. Lovely imagery and thought provoking too.

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  3. Wow. It's absolutely wonderful :D

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  4. Beyond my understanding I guess :P

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    1. Really? May be I will try harder next time :)

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  5. Ouch!
    I hope that knife didn't pass through an artery or vein. Nor an organ.
    ..

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    1. I think it went through her soul :)

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  6. That was a very shocking and effective way of portraying it!!

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  7. Dear Sfurti,

    Wow! I am blown away by the image of that woman, both the one in the picture and the one you've painted with your words. What an incredibly creative take on the prompt! How much pain she must have endured, to feel the way she does. Brilliant portrayal of the angst and the despair.

    Thank you for linking this up!

    Shailaja

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    1. Thank you so much Shailaja for a wonderful prompt. Love to be a part of it :)

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  8. A creative way of looking at things, lovely.

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  9. Ayyo! Why why why? Very sad. Wish she'd have not done that....

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  10. This was quite a shocker, Sfurti! What a reunion...or is it really? :)

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  11. Awesome write. You seem mastering the New Wave of Writing.

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    1. Thank you Sir. I don't know what is new wave of writing. I rarely write anything other than poetry. :)

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