Friday, 26 July 2013

Dear black

Dear Black,
Deep, mysterious, present and absent
You ink the heart and tug at the ache
Colors die, tears dry, smiles wry
White turns grey and grey turns dark

When you are there!!!

Linking with Trifecta: Week Seventy-Eight (Prompt is to describe any color or through the color something in 33 words)


  1. I like the description, "deep, mysterious, present and absent." All describe the color well, even though present and absent seem to contradict one another.

  2. I like this! Really good!

  3. I really liked that ink the heart line. Great work.

  4. I love the way you presented this with the black background. Very dramatic. I think the only good black is the LBD black.

  5. A magically stirred and mixed concoction of a deep and good poem. It's about time that dark shade had a letter written to it!:)


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