Tuesday, 16 July 2013

Squeeze (Haiku)


squeeze of lime
hint of salt & sugar;
let’s toast to life
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blushed cheeks
squeezed hands
lovers nest


30 comments:

  1. Perfectly done. The second one is just super

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  2. Yes! Let's toast to life. Cheers! :)'

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  3. Awesome... First one is too good :)

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  4. I enjoyed both..second one captures those magical moments so well..lovley pair of haiku..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/07/juicy-fingers-shine-haiku.html

    RS:)

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  5. lover's nest, haha, wonderful play of words! Loved 'em both!
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    My take for squeeze.

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  6. Wow...the second one is so rich romantically. Beautiful.

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  7. A very cozy romantic niche indeed and the first would taste better with a dash of gin too!! ;) Cheers!!

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    1. Haha or a glass of red. Cheers!!!

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  8. Wow! awesome composition.Second one is magnificent, both in its contours and contents.

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    1. Thanks so much Easwar...real words of encouragement!!!

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  9. Wow Wow..Both the Haikus are awesome..First One-Life lemon juice and the Second One-Lovers Tale..Loved it..Toast to both of them

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    1. Thanks thanks...so much dear!!!!!!!

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  10. Is the first one about lemonade? If so, I want some :) Nice composition :)

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  11. The first Haiku is refreshing and the second one warmed and tingled my heart. Wonderful pair!!

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  12. Both are impressive. The second one is full of passion.

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