Tuesday, 16 July 2013

Squeeze (Haiku)


squeeze of lime
hint of salt & sugar;
let’s toast to life
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blushed cheeks
squeezed hands
lovers nest


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28 comments:

  1. Reading Pleasure16 July 2013 at 12:24

    Perfectly done. The second one is just super

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  2. Lolly16 July 2013 at 16:08

    Yes! Let's toast to life. Cheers! :)'

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  3. Deepak Raghuraman16 July 2013 at 19:50

    Awesome... First one is too good :)

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  4. Ramesh Sood16 July 2013 at 20:46

    I enjoyed both..second one captures those magical moments so well..lovley pair of haiku..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/07/juicy-fingers-shine-haiku.html

    RS:)

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  5. Sankara Jayanth S16 July 2013 at 22:27

    lover's nest, haha, wonderful play of words! Loved 'em both!
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    My take for squeeze.

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  6. Panchali16 July 2013 at 22:41

    Wow...the second one is so rich romantically. Beautiful.

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  7. Nanka16 July 2013 at 23:46

    A very cozy romantic niche indeed and the first would taste better with a dash of gin too!! ;) Cheers!!

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  8. Anonymous17 July 2013 at 00:26

    These are both wonderful!

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  9. kalpana solsi17 July 2013 at 02:00

    loved the first one wow!

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  10. Easwar Arumugam17 July 2013 at 02:08

    Wow! awesome composition.Second one is magnificent, both in its contours and contents.

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    1. Unknown17 July 2013 at 02:13

      Thanks so much Easwar...real words of encouragement!!!

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  11. Anonymous17 July 2013 at 02:16

    Wow Wow..Both the Haikus are awesome..First One-Life lemon juice and the Second One-Lovers Tale..Loved it..Toast to both of them

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  12. The Mukhtiars17 July 2013 at 05:30

    Awesome

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  13. Unknown17 July 2013 at 06:03

    Is the first one about lemonade? If so, I want some :) Nice composition :)

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  14. Reshma17 July 2013 at 11:02

    The first Haiku is refreshing and the second one warmed and tingled my heart. Wonderful pair!!

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  15. Unknown18 July 2013 at 03:32

    Both are impressive. The second one is full of passion.

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