Monday, 22 July 2013

A lone leaf (Haiku)


A lone golden leaf
the last string of hope

blown away by wind



Written for Carpe Diem Prompt Riversong Haiku by Jane Reichhold  (mentioned below)
"river song
wind blown from autumn trees
a stream of gold"

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15 comments:

  1. Chèvrefeuille22 July 2013 at 18:39

    WOW! What a wonderful haiku you share here with Carpe Diem. It's very much in the same sense, tone and Spirit as the one by Jane reichhold. I think even that your haiku is stronger with deeper layers. Thank you so much for your participation in Carpe Diem.
    Namaste

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    1. Unknown22 July 2013 at 22:17

      Wow those are really strong words. I am humbled really!!!!

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  2. Maggie Grace22 July 2013 at 20:07

    Oh, this is a heart breaker. Well done!

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  3. Anonymous22 July 2013 at 21:05

    Nicely done.

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  4. Unknown22 July 2013 at 22:16

    Thanks Lolly :)

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  5. Anonymous23 July 2013 at 01:39

    Great feeling of holding on to summer here. Thank you :)

    Fallen Leaves

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  6. Magical Mystical Teacher23 July 2013 at 04:50

    It's hard to watch the last shred of hope take flight...

    Riversong

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  7. Wabi Sabi23 July 2013 at 07:36

    You've captured that sadness that is inevitable with the coming of winter! Lovely!

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  8. joanne23 July 2013 at 11:51

    this could be said of many endings....

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