Monday 22 July 2013

A lone leaf (Haiku)


A lone golden leaf
the last string of hope

blown away by wind



Written for Carpe Diem Prompt Riversong Haiku by Jane Reichhold  (mentioned below)
"river song
wind blown from autumn trees
a stream of gold"

Image credit Flickr

16 comments:

  1. WOW! What a wonderful haiku you share here with Carpe Diem. It's very much in the same sense, tone and Spirit as the one by Jane reichhold. I think even that your haiku is stronger with deeper layers. Thank you so much for your participation in Carpe Diem.
    Namaste

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    1. Wow those are really strong words. I am humbled really!!!!

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  2. Oh, this is a heart breaker. Well done!

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  3. Great feeling of holding on to summer here. Thank you :)

    Fallen Leaves

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  4. It's hard to watch the last shred of hope take flight...

    Riversong

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  5. You've captured that sadness that is inevitable with the coming of winter! Lovely!

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  6. this could be said of many endings....

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