Wednesday, 10 July 2013

Rains (haiku)


soaked and drenched
dancing in mud
a small toothy smile
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hot corn fritters
melt in my mouth
I taste the rains
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I walk barefoot
in the rain
healed within


26 comments:

  1. I love them!! Especially the bhutta one..perfect for the rain!

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  2. Sfurti - Loved your Haikus!
    You create a perfect image of a rainy day in the first two - subtle imagery at its best ! But its the third one that appealed to me the most. You have brought together nature and emotions so well in this one ! Superb !

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    1. Ruchira..thanks so much for such a wonderful comment :)

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  3. Loved all three haikus, how did you manage to write so many? :)

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    1. Thanks Sulekha...I really enjoy the form..but this time I got stuck,took me hours and still not very happy with them :)

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  4. healed within :) these words go so well with monsoons for most of us. The haikus are so wonderfully woven with words, all of them brought out the perfect imagery :)

    Richa

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  5. Well done!!

    Kathy
    http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com

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  6. Hi,

    A great poem---so real I need a towel and a hot drink.

    Great job. I have two blogs of poems on Blogger.com and I love this site.

    Bobbi Purvis

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    1. Thanks Purvi and I would make sure to read your words :))

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  7. you are an experienced one...WOW

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    1. Hey Shelly thanks :). I do write Haiku a lot these days but not experienced started only recently :)

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  8. I liked the last one. rains do heal. :)

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  9. Simply beautiful.Sure, rain a manna to the poets.

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