Thursday, 18 July 2013

Time (Haiku)


safe in your arms
tugging at your shirt

in your memory forever



Written for Haiku Heights #266 Time
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39 comments:

  1. Shrikant19 July 2013 at 09:32

    Really touching lines.. and a really really cute snap :)

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  2. kalpana solsi19 July 2013 at 23:04

    SO SO nice, A mother looks more beautiful when she holds her baby.

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  3. Kodjo Deynoo19 July 2013 at 23:13

    A loving mother and the joy of having her protection

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  4. Anonymous19 July 2013 at 23:21

    mum's arms safest place to be !! Fabulously expressed :)

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  5. Easwar Arumugam20 July 2013 at 01:45

    A heavenly abode is the mom's arm. Beautiful composition.

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  6. Unknown20 July 2013 at 02:40

    Wow so sweet!!Safe in mum's arm, let the time wait!

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  7. Unknown20 July 2013 at 07:35

    Lying snug to the mother is the best gift of life. The words are divine!

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  8. Nanka20 July 2013 at 09:05

    When you see the childhood photos, you realise how quickly time has passed!! Nice one!!

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  9. Reading Pleasure20 July 2013 at 12:05

    Ow, so so lovely

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  10. Arvind Passey20 July 2013 at 12:32

    Loved the thought expressed... but was this Haiku really following the 5-7-5 syllabic scheme?

    Arvind Passey
    www.passey.info

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    1. Unknown20 July 2013 at 13:18

      Arvind, english haiku do not necessarily adhere to the strict syllable count found in Japanese haiku but a haiku is still less than seventeen syllables. The Japanese, when they wrote it, wrote it in the form of 5-7-5 Japanese syllables, called "on" or "morae". When the same is written in English, it isn't always in the same 5-7-5 format, sometimes it's lesser too. . One of my favorite Haiku "Lily...out of water....out of itself" by Nick Virgilio

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  11. Anonymous21 July 2013 at 02:33

    Awww this is precious

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  12. Ramesh Sood21 July 2013 at 03:35

    Very beautiful haiku.. and nostalgic for me...pretty picture too..well done...

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/07/past-glows-in-now.html

    RS

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  13. Panchali21 July 2013 at 09:29

    This is really beautiful...awww :)

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  14. Vaishali Jain22 July 2013 at 08:06

    That touch is precious.

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  15. Unknown22 July 2013 at 08:18

    Thanks so much Susie :)

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  16. Sherry Blue Sky22 July 2013 at 13:33

    Beautiful......"in your memory forever". Precious days.

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  17. Ella22 July 2013 at 18:20

    This is so sweet! I love the photo, too :D

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  18. Vandana Sharma22 July 2013 at 21:35

    Warmth in mother';s arms

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  19. Anonymous23 July 2013 at 08:02

    So beautiful, the safest place on earth is in your mother's arms x

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  20. Akila24 July 2013 at 22:19

    awww!!! so sweet!!

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