Thursday, 27 June 2013

Tearful Goodbye (Haiku)



© Peggy Goetz

abandoned gaze
a shattered dream
tearful goodbye



Written for Peggy's hosting at Real Toad's with prompt - About Face
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13 comments:

  1. vanderloost27 June 2013 at 03:04

    I have been going through your haikus. They are wonderful

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  2. Mary27 June 2013 at 04:10

    I like your capture!

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  3. Unknown27 June 2013 at 05:18

    Thanks Loredana :)

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  4. Ella27 June 2013 at 07:20

    I can so see and sense the emotions on display!
    Well done...
    Writing it is a different story
    you captured the look

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  5. Susie Clevenger27 June 2013 at 10:23

    Beautiful response to the prompt...so full of emotion

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  6. Unknown27 June 2013 at 11:07

    I am speechless.

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  7. Kay L. Davies28 June 2013 at 11:10

    This is wonderful. I didn't see the sadness in this young face until I read your haiku, and now I can't help but see the sadness.
    K

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    1. Unknown28 June 2013 at 11:57

      Aww Thanks Kay and for some reason the eyes looked really sad to me!

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