The
rainy season
a
paper lantern in hand
I
walk along the verandah
(Buson)
Light
throws glimpse of a young smile
Covered
in mud, soaked in rain
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| Image violins-and-violence.deviantart.com |
Written for Carpe Diem's tan
renga challenge #3 "the rainy season"
Aah...those wonderful days of childhood!!!
ReplyDeleteYes Pankti :))
DeleteOh, so beautifully done. Poignant, really
ReplyDeleteThanks so much dear :)
Deletewhat a delightfully surprising turn
ReplyDeleteCheers!
JzB
THanks JzB :)
DeleteSweet sweet ending!
ReplyDeleteThanks Maggie :))
Deletelove the direction you took....another human being now protected from the dark rain...
ReplyDeleteThanks Joanne :)
DeleteVery Nice. You captured some memorable moments :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Diwakar :))
DeleteMud was once the delight of my life... lovely end.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn :)
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