Wednesday, 19 June 2013

Kingfisher



It took a flight,
Sun heat nesting in blue;
Only to hit the cage 


Haiku For Carpe Diem ‘ kingfisher’
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11 comments:

  1. Deepak Raghuraman19 June 2013 at 10:03

    Short & Sweet ! Keep it up..

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  2. Unknown19 June 2013 at 10:22

    Beautiful but sad. I seriously don't like to keep birds caged up...they are meant to fly free in the air...

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    1. Unknown19 June 2013 at 11:15

      Yes Pankti, its equivalent to cutting our legs!!

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  3. Chèvrefeuille19 June 2013 at 11:52

    Good Day Juzta Mum, I welcome you at Carpe Diem. I am your host here. Thank you for sharing this wonderful haiku on Kingfisher. I hope to see you again here on Carpe Diem. You're so welcome ... I appreciate all my visitors and participants.

    Namaste

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    1. Unknown19 June 2013 at 22:04

      Hey Kristjaan. Thanks so much. It was a wonderful prompt. Look forward to more :))

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  4. brudberg19 June 2013 at 12:07

    So sad... a kingfisher in a cage... well written

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  5. joanne19 June 2013 at 12:28

    surprise and sad ending....we can only hope he was outside of the cage!

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    1. Unknown19 June 2013 at 22:10

      Hey Thanks Joanne...birds have wings, are born for flying. We can only hope and wish that they always remain free!!

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  6. Diwakar Narayan20 June 2013 at 20:06

    Good one!

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