Wednesday, 26 June 2013

Crescendo


in my arms
crescendo of music
first cry

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fire
under the tree
crescendo of love

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your love
world of pleasure
crescendo of pain

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wrinkled touch
hands held under the ruins
crescendo of love




Written for Haiku Heights #259 Prompt Crescendo

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22 comments:

  1. RasmaSandra26 June 2013 at 05:05

    Lovely.

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  2. Reading Pleasure26 June 2013 at 06:03

    Oh, so beautifully done. The last one is powerful

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  3. kalpana solsi26 June 2013 at 07:20

    Reading your Haiku is a pleasure. The first is so so so nice.

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    1. Unknown26 June 2013 at 07:37

      Thanks so much Kalpana. First one is my favorite too :)

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  4. MylifeManya26 June 2013 at 07:29

    Very nice.... i simply love it and love u toooo

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  5. Rat26 June 2013 at 08:40

    nice and lovely :)

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  6. Simran26 June 2013 at 08:43

    all of them... beautiful :)

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  7. Nanka26 June 2013 at 09:20

    A crescendo of emotions!! So many varieties!! Lovely!!

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  8. Kalpana26 June 2013 at 09:23

    Thank you for making my day more beautiful with your evocative haiku.

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    1. Unknown26 June 2013 at 09:38

      Wow Kalpana. Thank you for such wonderful and thoughtful comment. You made my day!

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  9. vanderloost26 June 2013 at 09:49

    Nice ones

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  10. Unknown26 June 2013 at 21:41

    Loved the third one :)

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  11. Unknown26 June 2013 at 21:53

    I liked the third one :D

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  12. Diwakar Narayan27 June 2013 at 10:51

    Nice ones!

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