Thanks dear :-)
Thanks Diwakar :)
Simple and power packed words.I hope the quest is successful.
Thanks so much Indrani :D
The last two lines were unexpected & excellent ~ If I may note though, haiku doesn't repeat or rhyme words (thought) ~ You can edit the last word to something like: In a quest to grab its tail (or shadow) ~ Hope you don't mind ~
Thanks so much Grace. Was not aware of the rule. Have modified and used one of your suggestions. Thanks again :)
only one word- Profound!! :)
Thanks dear :)
I like your image of pursuing the shadow of thoughts. Very nice.
Thanks so much :)
If I understood how to grasp one single ripple, or even the shadow of a ripple, I would be wise. Unfortunately...Rippling with Fertility
:) Ya same here!!!
Fantastic imagery in this haiku. Breathtaking!
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