Sunday, 16 June 2013

Ripples





We sail on ripples

Of a thought

In a quest to grab its shadow




This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights - Ripple.


Image courtsey Jason Nahrung
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19 comments:

  1. Unknown16 June 2013 at 10:46

    Thanks dear :-)

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  2. Ritesh Agarwal16 June 2013 at 11:56

    very good

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  3. The Mukhtiars17 June 2013 at 00:48

    awesome

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  4. Diwakar Narayan17 June 2013 at 03:10

    Good one!

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  5. Indrani17 June 2013 at 06:16

    Simple and power packed words.
    I hope the quest is successful.

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  6. Grace17 June 2013 at 07:09

    The last two lines were unexpected & excellent ~ If I may note though, haiku doesn't repeat or rhyme words (thought) ~ You can edit the last word to something like: In a quest to grab its tail (or shadow) ~ Hope you don't mind ~

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    1. Unknown17 June 2013 at 07:32

      Thanks so much Grace. Was not aware of the rule. Have modified and used one of your suggestions. Thanks again :)

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  7. Anonymous17 June 2013 at 10:49

    only one word- Profound!! :)

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  8. Anonymous17 June 2013 at 12:29

    I like your image of pursuing the shadow of thoughts. Very nice.

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  9. Magical Mystical Teacher17 June 2013 at 12:56

    If I understood how to grasp one single ripple, or even the shadow of a ripple, I would be wise. Unfortunately...

    Rippling with Fertility

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  10. The Write Girl17 June 2013 at 18:22

    Fantastic imagery in this haiku. Breathtaking!

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