Friday, 28 June 2013

I walk barefoot



I walk barefoot with no direction
My direction lost with you
You scratched my soul
You stabbed deep in my heart
The void is still there
Your marks are still there
I look for you in no direction

I walk barefoot with no direction
I walk leaving blood spots
If you ever come looking for me
You will find my blood,
You will find pieces of me scattered here and there
I keep falling in no direction

I walk barefoot with no direction
With sin eating me away one by one
Nothing left, all eaten away
I only have eyes left, to wait for you
I wait for you in no direction

Written for  fireblosson friday on Real toads 
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30 comments:

  1. Tragic and wonderful. Such hurt and pain caused by another person.

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  2. I can feel the loss in this. The repetition works really well.

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  3. I agree with Lola and the repetition reinforces the feel of footsteps and heartbeat...

    Great response.

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  4. What a beautiful expression! You have a way with words Sf!

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  5. So painful. Liked the intensity of it.

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  6. This is definitely what loss feels like and I love the way the repeating lines enhance and underline those feelings. Beautifully done.

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  7. I feel the pain of loss throughout this piece. The repetition is so effective.

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  8. Truly heart-felt writing. Full of hurt and hope.

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  9. Piercing. Found this very moving.

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  10. Can feel the emotional longing. Enjoyed this poem.

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  11. You will find pieces of me scattered here and there - so much pain in your words. Could feel the loss!

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  12. This is haunting and made more so by the repetition, which only intensifies the lost feeling.

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