Got up from my sleep and
I
ran towards you,ran
like a crazy man
World had stopped..
Years and years I waited to be with you
Years and years I waited to be with you
Chained
by your thoughts, drawn towards you
I ran!!
I ran!!
I
lived like dead
I
lived with dead!!
Eating your memories, eating through roses,
Eating through pains...through thrones of your memories
Smoking the smoke, breathing the ashes...waiting for centuries
Waiting
for the clock...waiting for the cloudSmoking the smoke, breathing the ashes...waiting for centuries
Waiting
for the sun...waiting for THE hour
Waiting
for you
The hour is here,
You are here,
Waiting for me amongst the crowd, in the sea
You are here,
Waiting for me amongst the crowd, in the sea
Waiting
for me,waiting to be us
Drowning
in brown, Mourning in black...waiting for me
Burning
in gold, gazing in blank..waiting for me
Looking
through crowd
Looking through sky
Looking through sky
Looking
through lenses
Waiting
for me
We
survived the death, we survived the births,
We survived the world,
No
one can stop us now
To
become one
I
will scratch those eyes, I will swim through the fiends
I
will cut all the strings, I will wade through the pains
I
will snap all the fingers, I will eat all the chains
You
are in my arms, after years of wait
We
killed the foes, we changed the fate
Let
me carry you away from here,
Here life is dead
Let's run away to deads
Let's unite in death!!
For Out of Standard: Film School Drop Out Edition by Isadora
Gruye for an out of the box theme
THE CHALLENGE:Watch the clip.Write a poem inspired by it..
THE SCENE: Clip comes from the film Holy Motors.
I seriously respect cause you can write poem...
ReplyDeleteThank you Pankti :-)
DeleteI love the passionate side of the story you chose to feature!! And the repetition works here makes it more dramatic and apprehensive. Excellent job!!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Hannah :-)
DeleteGlad I did not miss this one juzta mum
ReplyDeleteThanks :-)
DeleteI love the manic energy of this one, which seems to me to give the lie to the ending. I look forward to reading more of your writing!
ReplyDeleteThanks Fireblossom. M glad you enjoyed it..the energy was drawn from guy moving around..i just couldn't disconnect from it and penned my thoughts around it.
Deletenice nice
ReplyDeleteThanks thanks :)
DeleteWow! That's nice outburst of emotions. It starts in torrents and ends in heavy downpour.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Easwar!!
DeleteI love your poem! It seems to be a delicious mingling of the romantic and the horrific. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Lolamouse :-)
DeleteLovely poem !
ReplyDeleteGlad you reverted back to Google Normal
Thanks dear.. M glad u commented back :-)
DeleteAwesome poem, especially lines ending with the chains
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Vijay :-)
DeleteHello,
ReplyDeleteSpent sometime browsing your blog, esp liked this very energetic poem and the post on warning signs, cool. Thanks much for coming by mine.
Thanks so much Nilanjana and welcome to my blog :-)
DeleteLovely poem, Sfurti. No task is harder than to wait...
ReplyDeleteThanks Diwakar...Also there is no better sentiment then finding someone after a long wait
Deletefull of emotions very well expressed.. brilliant poem.. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much a Rat :))
DeletePassionately wonderful. Very expressive. Enjoyed.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Rasma :))
DeleteI saw the film for the prompt, the text you wrote is really in the subject
ReplyDeletegood job, i like our poem
Françoise
Thanks Francoise. I am glad you saw the clip, it helps in putting the poem in perspective.
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