A little flicker of hope
A huge flame of desire
When I ask self
If I will make it
It always answers back
In affirmative
I carry the hope
Deep in my heart
I bury it
and put the lid
It is better hidden
The flame of forbidden
Path that I will take
Road that I will cross
To fuel the spark
For a better tomorrow
But the light radiates
Through my eyes
Every time I see a bird fly
I open my arms
And feel the flight
I try my best
To control the urge
I try my best
To keep my surge
away from the prying eyes
But nothing shows like joy
Nothing glows like fire
I am sure one day
My joy will burst out of my pores
I am sure some day
My fire will burn through my eyes
And that day
It will either burn me
Or
I will burn it forever
But till then
I am happy
I am hopeful
And
I am burning
(C) Juztamom 2014
The oracle gave me these lines as the
prompt:
“But happiness too can be difficult to
trust outdoors
Time
and again without a roof it floats away”
FROM “Inclusivity
Blueprint” by Kit Schluter
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Some of the fellow participants:
Image credit here
Some of the fellow participants:
http://janakinagraj.com/ – Janaki
http://jaibalarao.com/ - Jaibala
http://andiwrite.com/
– Count
http://ponderingtwo.blogspot.in/
– Rohan
http://advkaranshah.blogspot.in/
– Karan
http://thoughtspop.wordpress.com/ – Nithya
Wow...beautiful words :)
ReplyDeleteOooooh! That's some awesome verse!
ReplyDeleteWonderfully done Sfurti.
ReplyDeleteWow!! That's some beautiful lines capturing hope, desire and fire.. Loved it :)
ReplyDeletethat is such an inspiring poem, fills one with hope and desire :)
ReplyDelete"I am sure one day
ReplyDeleteMy joy will burst out of my pores
I am sure some day
My fire will burn through my eyes"
How very well written! Quite an honest effort with the prompt!
Beautifully written, Sfoo :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Sfurti, beautiful. Have I told you anytime that I love you? If not, I confess my love darling. <3
ReplyDeleteFire has always mystified me. And I love the part where you say the fire will either burn you up or you will burn it. Its beautiful, truly beautiful- Nits
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