Sound of virtue
ringing in my ears
A rhythm of love
swarming with tears
Heart within my heart
Touching and touched
Reaching my core
Dancing glory
Aches and adores
Body in my body
Small and inexplicable
Vision of beauty
Filling my eyes
Completing me truly
My life in me
(C) Juztamom
Shared with NaPoWriMo. The prompt was to write
a poem in which you very specifically describe something in terms of at least
three of the five senses.
Image credit here
Some of the fellow participants:
http://janakinagraj.com/ – Janaki
http://jaibalarao.com/ - Jaibala
http://andiwrite.com/ – Count
http://ponderingtwo.blogspot.in/ – Rohan
http://advkaranshah.blogspot.in/ – Karan
http://thoughtspop.wordpress.com/ – Nithya
I think moms always think alike......and when it comes to our senses we cant think beyond our children...."My life in me" what a way to describe that feeling of carrying your child within you....sums it up perfectly
ReplyDeleteWonderfully brought out the feeling of the child in a mom's womb.
ReplyDeleteAww...this is such a nice way to describe the feeling.
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