Wednesday 2 April 2014

Kiyohime

Tearing down your heart
Split wide open
With my claws deep sunken
In your blood
In your heart
I taste your blood
I taste you

Each piece that I tear
Belongs to me
Each cry that you whimper
Belongs to me
That heart and its entire lush
Belongs to me
You filled your soul
with all my might
then threw me away
and let me die


I died so I could live
I live now
So you could die
The horror of me
In your face
Is like thousand births

The trail of red
Fills the empty gut
That was left empty
When you left me
I look at the red
Splattered everywhere
Is it enough
To cover my pain
Is it enough to make me
Me again

Maybe not
But it is enough
To let you die
To let you see death
Coming close to you
Second by second
Cut by cut
Claw by claw
Sob by sob
It is enough to
Quench my thirst
Douse my fire
Soak my burns
But nothing will ever

Make me feel me again

(C) Juztamom 
Shared with NaPoWriMo Prompt used Kiyohime -a legendary creature from Japan
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7 comments:

  1. Wow Really well written...the entire tale shines through

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  2. WOW!! That's all I have to say. (Sorry posting as Dolu but that's my id on blogspot)

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  3. Excellent! Such strong underlying emotions.

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  4. It is enough to
    Quench my thirst
    Douse my fire
    Soak my burns
    But nothing will ever

    Make me feel me again


    These lines gave me goose bumps! What imagination!

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