Monday 14 April 2014

One Last Mile

One last mile
I want to walk with you
Looking into your eyes
Holding your hands
Walking in eternity
To the whale-road (1)
 
My feet were forlorn
Only a few days back
My days were heavy
Only a few days back
My mornings were dark
Only a few days back
My walks were lonely
Only a few days back
Before you took my hands
Into yours
And we walked towards
The whale-road (1)

We just had our first kiss
We just had our first miss
You just wiped the tears from my face
I just had my fears replaced
I just tasted your breath
The taste still lingers
Your blue is still entwined
With the orange hue of my fingers
No don’t let go,
Walk with me
Just one last mile
To the whale-road (1)


We just had our first FIRSTs
Leave the blood-amber(2)
Go break the wound-hoe(3)
I will not let you go
To the weather of weapons(4)
Before you walk with me
Just one last mile
To the whale-road(1)
I will make sure
The last mile lasts forever
The sword will never sleep(5)
We keep walking forever
To the whale-road (1)

(C) Juztamom

Shared with NaPoWriMo. The prompt was to use atleast one kenning. Read here about Kennings.
Kennings that I have used and their meaning are:
(1) Whale-road : Sea 
(2) Blood amber- Axe
(3) Wound-hoe : Sword
(4) Weather of weapons :War
(5) Sleep of the sword: Death

Image credit here
Some of the fellow participants:
http://jaibalarao.com/   - Jaibala

5 comments:

  1. Awesome use of the kennings.....Well done Sfurti....and ya awesome poem :)

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  2. Wow Sfurti! Awesome use of kennings! kidhar se laati hai itna imagination tu? superb hai ye!

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  3. This has a sing song effect to it...you can actually hum it...goooood one :)

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  4. Aww..this is so romantic!! Bestest hain!

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