Shaken
by the disbelief of my heart broken
and shattered
I ask heavens and hells together
To answer
my plea and show me the light, for
I
felt lost, left alone in the debris of lost love, bruised
and broken
drenched in my own tears and dampen soul
You
hold me in your arms, I feel light, as
a feather
flowing in the breeze, unknown
of its
origin and unaware of its purpose
you
guide me to the light inside you
I
find me
(C) Juztamom
Shared with NaPoWriMo. The
prompt was to write a poem in the form of a curtal
sonnet. The curtal sonnet is shorter than the normal sonnet,
fourteen line sonnet. Instead it has a first stanza of six lines, followed by a
second stanza of four, and then closes with a half-line.
Image credit here
Some of the fellow participants:
http://janakinagraj.com/ – Janaki
http://jaibalarao.com/ - Jaibala
http://andiwrite.com/ – Count
http://ponderingtwo.blogspot.in/ – Rohan
http://advkaranshah.blogspot.in/ – Karan
http://thoughtspop.wordpress.com/ – Nithya
A sad one, but ended in a good positive note.
ReplyDeleteSfoo...this is so beautiful. We all have seen a little light from heaven sometimes in our lives. For me that light is S :)
ReplyDeleteYeah, a positive ending. Light is always visible for those who search. Good one.
ReplyDeleteLove the ending !
ReplyDeletehello--this is beautiful! jean
ReplyDeleteBeautiful write....
ReplyDeleteI find me - lovely!
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