Saturday, 14 September 2013

Wilted (Haiku)

wilted meadow
thirsty birds
a  sweltering Indian summer

File:Bierstadt Albert Indian Summer Hudson River.jpg

Shared with Haiku Heights/Sep Heights day 15 Wilted 
Image credit here

Posted by at
Labels: , ,

21 comments:

  1. Anonymous14 September 2013 at 12:22

    I like this: I just wonder if you thought of experimenting with the lines in a different order? Thirsty birds might work well at the end?
    Nice picture too!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Unknown15 September 2013 at 10:31

      Hey thanks so much dear. Wow if we exchange the lines..it adds a new leaf to the haiku.

      "wilted meadow
      a sweltering Indian summer
      thirsty birds".

      Thanks so much!!

      Delete
  2. Unknown14 September 2013 at 21:58

    Indian Summer is simply unbearable. Nice one Sfurti.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Locomente14 September 2013 at 23:28

    Ah! Thank God summer is over!!
    Else I would have gone mad...

    Indian summer... Nice :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Unknown15 September 2013 at 10:33

      Haha Satya :). I hate the heat but I love Summers!! Thanks so much :)

      Delete
  4. Unknown15 September 2013 at 01:31

    Sfurti this is very well written. Scorching summer heat is unbearable. More so for poor animals.

    ReplyDelete
  5. Sumana Roy15 September 2013 at 01:59


    nice sketch of the blazing days........

    ReplyDelete
  6. kalpana solsi15 September 2013 at 02:00

    Our sweltering climate is the culprit. Lovely Haiku.

    ReplyDelete
  7. Rat15 September 2013 at 02:18

    good one..

    hey.. I am sharing my Liebster moment with you... my wishes..
    http://ratnibbles.blogspot.in/2013/09/my-award-moment.html

    have a great weekend.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Unknown15 September 2013 at 10:49

      Thanks Meera. Yay my first ever Liebster!!! Thanks :)

      Delete
  8. Gaurang Rao15 September 2013 at 05:01

    Just wonderfully expressed!

    ReplyDelete
  9. Ramesh Sood15 September 2013 at 07:22

    A very good haiku this... summers in some parts of the country are really difficult..

    RS:)

    ReplyDelete
  10. Unknown15 September 2013 at 10:31

    Thanks so much Lolly :)

    ReplyDelete
  11. joanne15 September 2013 at 13:14

    a treat for my senses,,,,lovely

    ReplyDelete
  12. Unknown23 September 2013 at 21:23

    Summer!!! Just the name is enough to make me sweat!

    ReplyDelete

Leave Your Mark

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)