Thursday, 22 August 2013

Tomorrow

I float through time
And travel through haze
breathing each moment,
each day
With hopes
With a dream
Of better tomorrow

I live but I’m not alive
I glide through a lifetime
Thinking about you
Knowing
You are there
Somewhere with a smile
Walking towards me
Coming to me
my tomorrow
 

Your promise makes me float
Your thoughts hold my limps
Your dreams fill my dark
I gaze at the sunset with a hope to see dawn
I wait for a better tomorrow
I know you are imminent

I know you are there


You are pacing towards me
And you will sweep me off
The sorrow and misery
Of being alone
Of being without you
I am waiting to be one again
I am waiting to be complete
I am waiting to get lost
In you
My tomorrow

(C) Juztamom 2013

37 comments:

  1. A vision of a better tomorrow is definitely a pleasant vision to have. I like gazing at sunset and hoping to see dawn. Well penned.

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    1. Mary thank you so much for such lovely words :)

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  2. smiles...perhaps tomorrow will be better...and sweep you off your feet...makes me think of one waiting on that love...that prince charming to come in and change the story....

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    1. Brian yes it does talks about waiting for love maybe and maybe just a better tomorrow :). Thanks so much for visiting :)

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  3. Extraordinary ~~ your poem of love.

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  4. That is very beautiful and has some hidden depths, a real touch of passion.

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  5. May tomorrow come much sooner than later.

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  6. Very lovely and I echo Jerry, may it come soon!

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  7. There is always hope for a better tomorrow. And the wait is always worth it.
    I like the idea of someone walking in our direction, until we finally meet, when the time is right.

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  8. Yes, there is much love awaiting us.

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  9. I like how you personified Tomorrow. Wonderful description of a vision! Thank you for posting!

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  10. beautiful one

    p.s regd the comment on my post, the picture is original, just did auto color, no effects , Mohd clicked it Btw, Thanks

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    1. Thanks Ali and wow Mohd is really talented, that was a superb photograph :)

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  11. You are great poems...you have grown so much in last few months :D

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    1. Pankti thankssss and yes I still remember penning the first one on the blog and being completely unsure of it.

      Thanks so much for being there :)

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  12. I too am hoping for a tomorrow like this ;) Nice one Sfruti.

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    1. Haha yes I think all of us are :). Thanks Janu!

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  13. nicely done....thanks for sharing

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  14. better tomorrow and waiting...like the positive light

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  15. This can be interpreted in so many different levels! Really nice!

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  16. Your Poems always comes with very good lessons and meaning and I love reading them.. :-)

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  17. Hope , prayer and god, I see all these in your lines:)

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  18. I fall short of words to praise .. everytime I read you .. its just been a few months since I know you through your work and you seem to have hidden so much talent and slowly you are releasing them :) !!

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  19. I love reading your poems that mean so much!

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  20. Sometimes we become so lost in longing for tomorrow that we miss the small joys present in the moment at hand. Lovely poem.

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  21. Oh...beautiful, may the tomorrow comes soon enough! Your composition nicely emphasizes the essence. Beautiful!

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  22. Hope is tomorrow, tomorrow is hope. Sweet poem

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