I
float through time
And travel
through haze
breathing each moment,
each day
With hopes
With a
dream
Of better
tomorrow
I live
but I’m not alive
I glide through a lifetime
Thinking
about you
Knowing
You are
there
Somewhere
with a smile
Walking
towards me
Coming
to me
my tomorrow
Your
promise makes me float
Your thoughts hold my limps
Your dreams
fill my dark
I gaze
at the sunset with a hope to see dawn
I wait
for a better tomorrow
I know
you are imminent
I know
you are there
You are
pacing towards me
And
you will sweep me off
The sorrow
and misery
Of
being alone
Of
being without you
I am
waiting to be one again
I am
waiting to be complete
I am
waiting to get lost
In you
My
tomorrow
(C) Juztamom 2013
Shared with Poetry Jam Poetic Visions and The Mag
A vision of a better tomorrow is definitely a pleasant vision to have. I like gazing at sunset and hoping to see dawn. Well penned.
ReplyDeleteMary thank you so much for such lovely words :)
Deletesmiles...perhaps tomorrow will be better...and sweep you off your feet...makes me think of one waiting on that love...that prince charming to come in and change the story....
ReplyDeleteBrian yes it does talks about waiting for love maybe and maybe just a better tomorrow :). Thanks so much for visiting :)
DeleteExtraordinary ~~ your poem of love.
ReplyDeleteHelen thanks so much :)
DeleteThat is very beautiful and has some hidden depths, a real touch of passion.
ReplyDeleteAlan thanks so much :)
DeleteMay tomorrow come much sooner than later.
ReplyDeleteThanks Jerry :)
DeleteVery lovely and I echo Jerry, may it come soon!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Sherry :)
DeleteThere is always hope for a better tomorrow. And the wait is always worth it.
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of someone walking in our direction, until we finally meet, when the time is right.
Ladycat thank you so much :)
DeleteYes, there is much love awaiting us.
ReplyDeleteThanks Laurie :)
DeleteI like how you personified Tomorrow. Wonderful description of a vision! Thank you for posting!
ReplyDeletePeggy thanks so much :)
Deletebeautiful one
ReplyDeletep.s regd the comment on my post, the picture is original, just did auto color, no effects , Mohd clicked it Btw, Thanks
Thanks Ali and wow Mohd is really talented, that was a superb photograph :)
DeleteYou are great poems...you have grown so much in last few months :D
ReplyDeletePankti thankssss and yes I still remember penning the first one on the blog and being completely unsure of it.
DeleteThanks so much for being there :)
I too am hoping for a tomorrow like this ;) Nice one Sfruti.
ReplyDeleteHaha yes I think all of us are :). Thanks Janu!
Deletenicely done....thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting dear :)
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ReplyDeletebetter tomorrow and waiting...like the positive light
This can be interpreted in so many different levels! Really nice!
ReplyDeleteGood One !!!!
ReplyDeleteYour Poems always comes with very good lessons and meaning and I love reading them.. :-)
ReplyDeleteHope , prayer and god, I see all these in your lines:)
ReplyDeleteI fall short of words to praise .. everytime I read you .. its just been a few months since I know you through your work and you seem to have hidden so much talent and slowly you are releasing them :) !!
ReplyDeleteI love reading your poems that mean so much!
ReplyDeleteSometimes we become so lost in longing for tomorrow that we miss the small joys present in the moment at hand. Lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteOh...beautiful, may the tomorrow comes soon enough! Your composition nicely emphasizes the essence. Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteVery well worded.
ReplyDeleteHope is tomorrow, tomorrow is hope. Sweet poem
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