I fall
in and out of love
I am
born and I die
I travel
countries and I fly
I
break my heart and I break others’
I
live through you, lavish tales in a book
I
fall and I get up
I
loose and I win
I
forgive and I forget
I
move and move on
I
dance and groove on
I
live through you, my little one
You
are fiery and you are cool
I
cry and I snicker
I am
speechless and I talk to you
You
shut up and listen
I
live through you, my nibbles on a plate
(C) Juztamom 2013
Some
of my obsessions for Verse First at Poet's United.
Fantastically penned. I love the second stanza. Very emotional and honest. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteO the books! So many lives to pant over! And so I have heard of children and food, but i am stuck in the bookstore of the heart.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully composed, really loved each and every line :)
ReplyDeleteAlso, love your new Logo (Like)
I would really like to know what was going on in your mind when you wrote this. Three seemingly unconnected things so beautifully interwoven in words and verse. My favorite - the second stanza. Really beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteMaking the pieces fit with tender wit and compassion... this is a beauty for sure. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteI love the middle stanza....we do live so much through our children.
ReplyDeleteBooks, little ones and nibbles on a plate. What wonderful obsessions and beautiful poetry. Very nicely done.
ReplyDeleteSo sweet of love & loss.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.... Soulful.......... direct from heart. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteMon n Kid logo is simply beautiful.
Thanks for sharing !!!!!
Lovely !!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteLove your choices =) I have my own little one who I can hear now playing in her room, so precious
ReplyDeleteLove your obsessions and so well penned too. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteLove, love, love it!
ReplyDeleteAnd that is Me!
ReplyDeleteI loved it! :)
Thanks for visiting my space. Hoping to see you more. :)
Now that is a full and precious life! Thanks for sharing.
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