All the ingredients of a the urban life is included in the Haiku. very nice.
Great haiku...it is definitely a whirlwind
Thanks Susie :)
Haha... I realize that everyday I'm in the Delhi metro... On second thoughts, everywhere, really. Life moves fast.
Vaishali I agree, life moves fast everywhere and we move fast with it, so we don't get left behind :)
life in a metro does zip by...and it is not hard to lose yourself too. very well said Juztamom:)
Reshma thanks so much :)
Very nice...thank you for sharing.PeaceSiggi
Siggi thanks so much :)
Great haiku as well as pic :D
Thanks Dear :)
Very ture..it's a whirlwind..Nice haiku.My haiku here..http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/08/shadow-of-high-rise-haiku.htmlRS
Thanks RS :)
Great haiku. Very well done
Exactly.....as a first entry you prove that you are quite comfortable at writing Haiku...very nice Sfruti
Thanks so much dear. Don't know how comfortable I am but I enjoy the form a lot :)
Yes! that would be life in a Metro.
Himani yes :)
definitely lost in a whirlwind...can relate my life as well..good usage of the prompt...and well written :)
especially for mumbai… a city that never sleeps!!
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All the ingredients of a the urban life is included in the Haiku. very nice.
ReplyDeleteGreat haiku...it is definitely a whirlwind
ReplyDeleteThanks Susie :)
DeleteHaha... I realize that everyday I'm in the Delhi metro... On second thoughts, everywhere, really. Life moves fast.
ReplyDeleteVaishali I agree, life moves fast everywhere and we move fast with it, so we don't get left behind :)
Deletelife in a metro does zip by...and it is not hard to lose yourself too. very well said Juztamom:)
ReplyDeleteReshma thanks so much :)
DeleteVery nice...thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeletePeace
Siggi
Siggi thanks so much :)
DeleteGreat haiku as well as pic :D
ReplyDeleteThanks Dear :)
DeleteVery ture..it's a whirlwind..Nice haiku.
ReplyDeleteMy haiku here..
http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/08/shadow-of-high-rise-haiku.html
RS
Thanks RS :)
DeleteGreat haiku. Very well done
ReplyDeleteExactly.....as a first entry you prove that you are quite comfortable at writing Haiku...very nice Sfruti
ReplyDeleteThanks so much dear. Don't know how comfortable I am but I enjoy the form a lot :)
DeleteYes! that would be life in a Metro.
ReplyDeleteHimani yes :)
Deletedefinitely lost in a whirlwind...
ReplyDeletecan relate my life as well..
good usage of the prompt...and well written :)
especially for mumbai… a city that never sleeps!!
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