Tuesday, 6 August 2013

Life in a metro

fun, fast and frolic
lost in a whirlwind

life in a Metro



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20 comments:

  1. All the ingredients of a the urban life is included in the Haiku. very nice.

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  2. Great haiku...it is definitely a whirlwind

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  3. Haha... I realize that everyday I'm in the Delhi metro... On second thoughts, everywhere, really. Life moves fast.

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    1. Vaishali I agree, life moves fast everywhere and we move fast with it, so we don't get left behind :)

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  4. life in a metro does zip by...and it is not hard to lose yourself too. very well said Juztamom:)

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  5. Very nice...thank you for sharing.
    Peace
    Siggi

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  6. Great haiku as well as pic :D

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  7. Very ture..it's a whirlwind..Nice haiku.

    My haiku here..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/08/shadow-of-high-rise-haiku.html

    RS

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  8. Exactly.....as a first entry you prove that you are quite comfortable at writing Haiku...very nice Sfruti

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    1. Thanks so much dear. Don't know how comfortable I am but I enjoy the form a lot :)

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  9. Yes! that would be life in a Metro.

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  10. definitely lost in a whirlwind...
    can relate my life as well..
    good usage of the prompt...and well written :)

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  11. especially for mumbai… a city that never sleeps!!

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