Wednesday 24 July 2013

Tomorrow is rising

Propel your believes
Bury your fury
Erase today and write a new story
There is always tomorrow
And tomorrow is rising 




No don’t give up
Your dreams are tender
Your mind may wander;
Be curious and render
That life is tough and the journey tougher
But don’t lose hope
There is always tomorrow
And tomorrow is rising

Doubts may surface
And you may get nervous
Uncles may growl and aunts may scowl
But don’t lose your pace
There is fun in the chase
Swap each shrill  with a slice of grit
Change your blues with a hint of wit
And don’t forget there is always tomorrow
And tomorrow is rising

No problem so strong that can’t be solved
No issue so strong that can’t be resolved
Factor in your strength and 
shake the indolence
Perch your dreams on a hilltop
and root it to substance
Look out, watch out, for tomorrow
I know tomorrow is rising

Don’t stay still
Have an urge and a will
to wend your own path
Be typical but class
Yesterday is gone,
Today is going
Tomorrow is there
And tomorrow is rising


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Image credit Catarino

22 comments:

  1. Only one word justify this line "INSPIRED"..Great lines.. :-)

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    1. Thanks so much for your INspiring comment:)

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  2. I like the positive tone, tomorrow is rising ~

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  3. This is really good advice and a fine poem. I hope you share it with the people in your life.

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    1. Thanks Kerry :) and yes I will share it :)

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  4. I agree with everyone great use of the list and great message

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  5. Thanks justa mum - glad to read this positive message, and very much liked the pace, rhyme, and rhythm - and this line made me smile: "Uncles may growl and aunts may scowl". ~ M

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    1. Thanks so much M for a wonderful list...loved writing on it :)

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  6. Such a beautiful, uplifting piece..It is like a prayer to speak when your spirit gets weary.

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    1. Susie thank you for such wonderful words!!

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  7. Optimism at its best :D Great one.

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  8. Oh, how delightful...
    "Erase today and write a new story
    There is always tomorrow
    And tomorrow is rising"!
    K

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  9. That's getting into the right frame of mind!

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  10. Yea, life hinges on tomorrow. The positive tone of the poetry is very much inspiring.

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  11. Uncles may growl and aunts may scowl...........so true. You have reminded me of an instance which may soon turn into a blog post. Thank you Sfurti for inspiring me. :)

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    1. Madhu really??? Thanks so much dear...I am obliged!!!!

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