WOW! What a wonderful haiku you share here with Carpe Diem. It's very much in the same sense, tone and Spirit as the one by Jane reichhold. I think even that your haiku is stronger with deeper layers. Thank you so much for your participation in Carpe Diem. Namaste
so pretty:)
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DeleteWOW! What a wonderful haiku you share here with Carpe Diem. It's very much in the same sense, tone and Spirit as the one by Jane reichhold. I think even that your haiku is stronger with deeper layers. Thank you so much for your participation in Carpe Diem.
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Wow those are really strong words. I am humbled really!!!!
DeleteOh, this is a heart breaker. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Maggie :)
DeleteNicely done.
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DeleteGreat feeling of holding on to summer here. Thank you :)
ReplyDeleteFallen Leaves
Thanks so much :)
DeleteIt's hard to watch the last shred of hope take flight...
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Yes :)) Thanks for visiting!
DeleteYou've captured that sadness that is inevitable with the coming of winter! Lovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks dear :)
Deletethis could be said of many endings....
ReplyDeleteTrue Joanne :)
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