The
urge to reunite with her core was stronger today. Siya knew she didn’t belong
here; her true self was inside. With a swift motion she dug the knife inside
her and touched her bones. She reached the skeleton of what she was. She will
never be incomplete again.
Wow! I am blown away by the image of that woman, both the one in the picture and the one you've painted with your words. What an incredibly creative take on the prompt! How much pain she must have endured, to feel the way she does. Brilliant portrayal of the angst and the despair.
Gruesome yet poignant! What imagination you possess Sfu!
ReplyDeleteThank you Gau :)
DeleteSfoo is on a roll. And I am loving every bit of it. Lovely imagery and thought provoking too.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jai :)
DeleteWow. It's absolutely wonderful :D
ReplyDeleteThanks Pankti :)
DeleteBeyond my understanding I guess :P
ReplyDeleteReally? May be I will try harder next time :)
DeleteThis is awesome!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much :)
DeleteOuch!
ReplyDeleteI hope that knife didn't pass through an artery or vein. Nor an organ.
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I think it went through her soul :)
DeleteThat was a very shocking and effective way of portraying it!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Rosh :)
DeleteDear Sfurti,
ReplyDeleteWow! I am blown away by the image of that woman, both the one in the picture and the one you've painted with your words. What an incredibly creative take on the prompt! How much pain she must have endured, to feel the way she does. Brilliant portrayal of the angst and the despair.
Thank you for linking this up!
Shailaja
Thank you so much Shailaja for a wonderful prompt. Love to be a part of it :)
DeleteA creative way of looking at things, lovely.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sulekkha :)
DeleteAyyo! Why why why? Very sad. Wish she'd have not done that....
ReplyDeleteYeah I wish that too Leo!
DeleteThis was quite a shocker, Sfurti! What a reunion...or is it really? :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Beloo. It was for her. :)
DeleteAwesome write. You seem mastering the New Wave of Writing.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sir. I don't know what is new wave of writing. I rarely write anything other than poetry. :)
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