Lost in the neverland,
beaten and broken
If you look around me
you will see,
just pieces
scattered here and there
Look at that,
a piece of my heart
red and bleeding,but
not dead,
still beating
I let it go,but
it didn’t let me
It still has blood,
It still has love
Look at that,
a piece of my eyes,
glassy and tearful
I wanted it to shut down
I wanted to suck out all the
dreams, but
it didn’t let me
It wanted to see,
the mystery of tomorrow,
the after of sorrow
Look at that,
a piece of my leg,
all slaughtered and chewed
I wanted it to stop walking, but
it refused to do so,
it wants to travel,
so many places to unravel
Look at that,
a piece of my hand,
shaking and trembling, but
refusing to let go
of the pen
of the verse, still
floating in the air
I wanted to give up, but
it didn’t let me
So many more
chapters to live
So many more
chapters to write
Look at that,
a piece of my soul,
lying robbed and slain
I wanted it to leave me, but
it is still holding on
Holding on to me,
the little child of it,
waiting for it to grow
Look at that,
a piece of my body,
lying naked and wanting
I wanted to leave it alone,
to let the thirst die,
to douse the fire
But,
It is burning on,
eating through the darkness,
beaming through the pyre
of a dead yesterday
and looking forward
to the better tomorrow
Dedicated to E.E.Cummings and inspired from one of my
favorite poems “I
Will Wade Out” by him.
Shared with “Real
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Wholeness is not made of its pieces... but sometimes it is, and in the strongest and most beautiful of ways.
ReplyDeleteThis is breathtakingly powerful.
Thanks you Magaly :)
Delete"The after of sorrow"- what a stunning line in a gripping pen. Thank you for joining in ~
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Grapeling :)
Deleteeven scattered into pieces we there are still something holding us there.. something that keep us together.
ReplyDeleteI agree Bjorn! Thanks for visiting :)
DeleteThis is a wonderfully positive response to the prompt - that spirit in us that wants to rise and rise again from pain, to see "the after of sorrow". Beautifully done.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Sherry!
DeleteWhy oh why is it that so many do not see their parts as a whole? Lovely ...
ReplyDeleteThanks Helen :)
DeleteMy first time here, thanks to Real Toads! This poem felt a bit visceral at first (because I'm such a literal reader, all I could see was body parts...) but then I settled in and found the right place in my mind to appreciate this "deconstruction" of the body, while seeing the fullness of the soul. Really, a lovely, stirring piece! Amy
ReplyDeleteThank you so much and welcome Sharp Little Pencil. I love your blog!
DeleteToo dark for my current taste (as I'm suffering from indigestion issues with the ongoing infection thing)... Btw, why do you highlight few words 'red'? :-/
ReplyDeleteAS those words were a part of the prompt :)
DeleteI loved the "never give up" spirit in the poem :)
ReplyDeleteI am tearing up now. :( What a beautiful poem Sfurti! Brilliant!!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Poo!
DeleteThis is just beautiful! Really.
ReplyDeleteRachna thanks so much! I am glad you liked it. :)
DeleteJust one word - ' WOW'
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Jyotsna :)
DeleteThanks Zongrik :)
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