I like this: I just wonder if you thought of experimenting with the lines in a different order? Thirsty birds might work well at the end?Nice picture too!
Hey thanks so much dear. Wow if we exchange the lines..it adds a new leaf to the haiku."wilted meadowa sweltering Indian summerthirsty birds".Thanks so much!!
Nice image rich poem. Well done.
Thanks so much Lolly :)
Indian Summer is simply unbearable. Nice one Sfurti.
Thanks so much Ushaji :)
Ah! Thank God summer is over!!Else I would have gone mad...Indian summer... Nice :)
Haha Satya :). I hate the heat but I love Summers!! Thanks so much :)
Sfurti this is very well written. Scorching summer heat is unbearable. More so for poor animals.
Thank you Ushaji again :)
nice sketch of the blazing days........
Thanks so much Sumana :)
Our sweltering climate is the culprit. Lovely Haiku.
Thanks so much Kalpana :)
good one..hey.. I am sharing my Liebster moment with you... my wishes..http://ratnibbles.blogspot.in/2013/09/my-award-moment.htmlhave a great weekend.
Thanks Meera. Yay my first ever Liebster!!! Thanks :)
Just wonderfully expressed!
Thanks so much Gaurang :)
A very good haiku this... summers in some parts of the country are really difficult..RS:)
Thanks so much RS :)
a treat for my senses,,,,lovely
Summer!!! Just the name is enough to make me sweat!
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I like this: I just wonder if you thought of experimenting with the lines in a different order? Thirsty birds might work well at the end?
ReplyDeleteNice picture too!
Hey thanks so much dear. Wow if we exchange the lines..it adds a new leaf to the haiku.
Delete"wilted meadow
a sweltering Indian summer
thirsty birds".
Thanks so much!!
Nice image rich poem. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Lolly :)
DeleteIndian Summer is simply unbearable. Nice one Sfurti.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Ushaji :)
DeleteAh! Thank God summer is over!!
ReplyDeleteElse I would have gone mad...
Indian summer... Nice :)
Haha Satya :). I hate the heat but I love Summers!! Thanks so much :)
DeleteSfurti this is very well written. Scorching summer heat is unbearable. More so for poor animals.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ushaji again :)
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ReplyDeletenice sketch of the blazing days........
Thanks so much Sumana :)
DeleteOur sweltering climate is the culprit. Lovely Haiku.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Kalpana :)
Deletegood one..
ReplyDeletehey.. I am sharing my Liebster moment with you... my wishes..
http://ratnibbles.blogspot.in/2013/09/my-award-moment.html
have a great weekend.
Thanks Meera. Yay my first ever Liebster!!! Thanks :)
DeleteJust wonderfully expressed!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Gaurang :)
DeleteA very good haiku this... summers in some parts of the country are really difficult..
ReplyDeleteRS:)
Thanks so much RS :)
Deletea treat for my senses,,,,lovely
ReplyDeleteSummer!!! Just the name is enough to make me sweat!
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