tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.comments2023-08-07T07:20:53.036-07:00Juzt a mom!Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11496129504787572149noreply@blogger.comBlogger4495125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-39201236535279561372016-08-06T11:02:12.700-07:002016-08-06T11:02:12.700-07:00This was so intenseThis was so intenseBattered Hopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04084857421183756543noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-33025660564187985372016-08-06T10:19:58.710-07:002016-08-06T10:19:58.710-07:00What a desperate verse! And the picture captures o...What a desperate verse! And the picture captures of so well, too.Nisha Sanjeevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10722103399871691090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-8303660362187464242016-08-06T07:40:35.909-07:002016-08-06T07:40:35.909-07:00This is you know something extra, your words reall...This is you know something extra, your words really affects me from within, I have started reading casually than becomes serious while reading downwards, every line carries a lot of meaning.<br />Thank you so much for posting this.<br />Touched.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03234064029066891846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-59552457718341684322016-08-06T06:20:34.045-07:002016-08-06T06:20:34.045-07:00Sigh, quite a pathos-filled poem. Beautifully done...Sigh, quite a pathos-filled poem. Beautifully done.Shailaja Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12639542621638996802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-74556286435777822462016-08-06T04:40:07.091-07:002016-08-06T04:40:07.091-07:00I loved the part where you think you heard your he...I loved the part where you think you heard your heart... times when reality and dreams are on borderline.Rajlakshmihttp://destinychildosheen.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-39176211340617671042016-08-06T04:24:20.318-07:002016-08-06T04:24:20.318-07:00Very soulful and pensive. Sometimes things are jus...Very soulful and pensive. Sometimes things are just not meant to be. Beautifully penned.Suzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05337531041006701719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-64023645652864858882016-08-06T04:19:45.270-07:002016-08-06T04:19:45.270-07:00I just hope she hears from him one day!
Cheers
Ge...I just hope she hears from him one day!<br /><br />Cheers<br /><a href="www.geetikagupta.com" rel="nofollow">Geets</a><br />Boisterous Beehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02989123295379786851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-39389214936751645142016-08-06T03:56:25.783-07:002016-08-06T03:56:25.783-07:00You're good at this Sfurti. Such yearning for ...You're good at this Sfurti. Such yearning for someone that the should seeks her/him put even after death. Obsessivemomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06659233519392456624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-1925079337577466042016-08-06T01:56:26.734-07:002016-08-06T01:56:26.734-07:00Beautiful take on love until death and further! Th...Beautiful take on love until death and further! The image you've selected is a perfect compliment for the dark setting you've created!Kala Ravihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02587602939942248150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-54947783340018815862016-08-05T20:34:05.115-07:002016-08-05T20:34:05.115-07:00That's a sweet one. And beginning school - tha...That's a sweet one. And beginning school - that's such a huge step. Nicely done Sfurti.Obsessivemomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06659233519392456624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-51472236644107624822016-08-05T18:30:50.184-07:002016-08-05T18:30:50.184-07:00And even bigger bags. Good one there.And even bigger bags. Good one there.Parulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14933210393492294463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-20100794581937166252016-08-05T18:12:53.242-07:002016-08-05T18:12:53.242-07:00Big steps taken in those tiny shoes avhieving self...Big steps taken in those tiny shoes avhieving self-reliance. <br />Being a mom of a small kid who started going to big school last year, that photo brought back memories. Anamika Agnihotrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16153091934373383608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-48435836128299697022016-08-05T12:31:58.254-07:002016-08-05T12:31:58.254-07:00That's so poignant and so heart-breakingly bea...That's so poignant and so heart-breakingly beautiful too! Shilpa Garghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11016927627801620377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-90628641647029740032016-08-05T12:01:45.863-07:002016-08-05T12:01:45.863-07:00Such a beautiful and poignant composition. It touc...Such a beautiful and poignant composition. It touched my heart in a certain way...really!Tarang Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10346902969017351667noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-61298761528766480592016-08-05T04:22:45.521-07:002016-08-05T04:22:45.521-07:00Oh but he was caught red handed! Krishna's sto...Oh but he was caught red handed! Krishna's stories are all-time favourites but then he's the most enchanting of all gods.Obsessivemomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06659233519392456624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-59959272612852494872016-08-04T12:49:10.081-07:002016-08-04T12:49:10.081-07:00Heart warming and touching expressing unbarred emo...Heart warming and touching expressing unbarred emotions!Vishal Bheeroohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18229153100959064360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-74948698065133140862016-08-02T07:59:21.474-07:002016-08-02T07:59:21.474-07:00WHAT? NO, NO, NO! Good oneWHAT? NO, NO, NO! Good oneBattered Hopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04084857421183756543noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-13185720776210969552016-08-02T07:27:14.773-07:002016-08-02T07:27:14.773-07:00A bit of a stretch on the prompt, but I liked it. ...A bit of a stretch on the prompt, but I liked it. Welcome back to blogging, Sfurti. A bit unexepected ending thoughSid @ iwrotethose.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16726189024235943108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-8726198935588085742016-08-02T01:06:30.800-07:002016-08-02T01:06:30.800-07:00Sad. So many such real life stories out there. :-(...Sad. So many such real life stories out there. :-(Rekhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13233279907027595531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-34716289995327430352016-08-02T00:24:11.074-07:002016-08-02T00:24:11.074-07:00How sad is that - to have to watch your loved ones...How sad is that - to have to watch your loved ones hurting and depressed from afar. Obsessivemomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06659233519392456624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-27300661394023820082016-08-02T00:22:31.259-07:002016-08-02T00:22:31.259-07:00I thought it was a romantic piece and this is what...I thought it was a romantic piece and this is what it turned out. Scary and Obsessive. Nice Sfurti. Obsessivemomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06659233519392456624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-11759806990622132912016-08-01T23:19:44.819-07:002016-08-01T23:19:44.819-07:00OMG! That was blood-curling! Why oh why! Why do pe...OMG! That was blood-curling! Why oh why! Why do people do such vengeful acts in the name of love! Brilliant narration Sfurti!Kala Ravihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02587602939942248150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-32392342657486806072016-08-01T20:17:33.817-07:002016-08-01T20:17:33.817-07:00Damn ... that's a recipe for a good murder mys...Damn ... that's a recipe for a good murder mystery episode. Poor girl.rajlakshmihttp://destinychildosheen.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-28261109543901577002016-08-01T18:50:47.055-07:002016-08-01T18:50:47.055-07:00Woah! Spooky. Ah, Love is such a tricky feeling. N...Woah! Spooky. Ah, Love is such a tricky feeling. Nice take on the prompt.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12013012311125072637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-52381280968751147002016-08-01T18:33:08.508-07:002016-08-01T18:33:08.508-07:00jee! that was beautiful, heart wreaking and yet I ...jee! that was beautiful, heart wreaking and yet I loved it!!<br />Ruchira Khannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02785488638308126879noreply@blogger.com