tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post7930040206248815326..comments2023-08-07T07:20:53.036-07:00Comments on Juzt a mom!: Broken WingsAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11496129504787572149noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-67763951692629333972015-06-10T08:54:07.229-07:002015-06-10T08:54:07.229-07:00Sfoo what is with the sad, scary poems lately. I w...Sfoo what is with the sad, scary poems lately. I wont tell you how awesome the verses were, because you are just brilliant there we all know that. What I want to talk about is the story and the narration that carried it brilliantly and the twist that no one expected. This was just wonderfully done <3Jaibala Raohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15566326423651424535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-78482200886546797512015-06-08T06:08:39.520-07:002015-06-08T06:08:39.520-07:00Oh gosh! that's a big twist..scary..Well writt...Oh gosh! that's a big twist..scary..Well written poem..Parulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14933210393492294463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-81423393992480067262015-06-07T22:31:46.478-07:002015-06-07T22:31:46.478-07:00Ooh, that was rather unexpected! Such a quick and ...Ooh, that was rather unexpected! Such a quick and sad twisted turn! Well written though! ;) <3elly stornebrinkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03901483285489789483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-40567138081586571192015-06-07T21:10:36.970-07:002015-06-07T21:10:36.970-07:00wow!! the twist at the very end was quite unexpect...wow!! the twist at the very end was quite unexpected!<br />I love your poetry :)Pixiehttp://mytakeoneverything9.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-70697888464066060582015-06-07T09:19:35.010-07:002015-06-07T09:19:35.010-07:00Oh, that took a twist at the end! Well done.Oh, that took a twist at the end! Well done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07740633364461217423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-9061642073469465742015-06-06T22:20:21.302-07:002015-06-06T22:20:21.302-07:00You read and you wonder and then comes the slam du...You read and you wonder and then comes the slam dung finish. Well done. RasmaSandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11978012654446052037noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-88358299517651068682015-06-06T11:48:20.306-07:002015-06-06T11:48:20.306-07:00Oops ... what seemed to be a romantic poem turned ...Oops ... what seemed to be a romantic poem turned out to be so scary ... but kudos to you for producing such a mind boggling twist ... loved it :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-79552896982734273272015-06-05T08:27:00.523-07:002015-06-05T08:27:00.523-07:00I just remembered he movie : 3096 days"!I just remembered he movie : 3096 days"!Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-1070587001663073482015-06-04T10:27:00.479-07:002015-06-04T10:27:00.479-07:00Brrrr... Hope that end never becomes real for anyo...Brrrr... Hope that end never becomes real for anyone. Creepy :P What's with the scary stories these days? Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.com