tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post2421812521028110471..comments2023-08-07T07:20:53.036-07:00Comments on Juzt a mom!: Her Dream Wedding?Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11496129504787572149noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-12109913604622453552013-10-28T15:03:01.817-07:002013-10-28T15:03:01.817-07:00Such a collection of emotions...the urge to do wha...Such a collection of emotions...the urge to do what she must against what she doesn't want...love the ending...Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-49777680907483643002013-10-28T13:38:56.609-07:002013-10-28T13:38:56.609-07:00How empowering, in the end she believes that she d...How empowering, in the end she believes that she does have a choice.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-68531613889613122602013-10-28T09:18:06.012-07:002013-10-28T09:18:06.012-07:00You have written well the conflicting emotions of ...You have written well the conflicting emotions of what tradition has taught is the fairytale dream, the fears and wonderings about the actual reality, the pressure to go thru the door of what is expected, the soul's wish to fly and choose one's own path. You have captured it all so well. And have given her her own happy ending!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-91159216116356157542013-10-28T07:27:09.558-07:002013-10-28T07:27:09.558-07:00evocative and emotional write ~ Mevocative and emotional write ~ MAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-58546278709791851612013-10-28T06:36:34.338-07:002013-10-28T06:36:34.338-07:00I liked the way this built until her choice of doo...I liked the way this built until her choice of door at the end.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-792163640155257192013-10-28T04:49:09.490-07:002013-10-28T04:49:09.490-07:00A ballad-like form with refrain lets me feel her e...A ballad-like form with refrain lets me feel her emotion as it reaches the point of flight! AMazing poem.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-34884008069549355602013-10-28T04:28:29.476-07:002013-10-28T04:28:29.476-07:00'She closes her eyes and chooses the door
That...'She closes her eyes and chooses the door<br />That will let her fly<br />That will let her be free<br />Forever!!' ~ I like this optimistic closing! humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-78207261769026765992013-10-28T04:18:38.559-07:002013-10-28T04:18:38.559-07:00Lovely poem.Lovely poem.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13382387434418485145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-58990252799172641032013-10-28T02:56:19.600-07:002013-10-28T02:56:19.600-07:00We may say that we are living in an advanced socie...We may say that we are living in an advanced society where men and women are equal, but still there are issues like you mentioned in your lovely poem.Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-7125747203190098102013-10-27T09:37:53.900-07:002013-10-27T09:37:53.900-07:00Lovely poem. and the feelings of a bride well brou...Lovely poem. and the feelings of a bride well brought out.kalpana solsihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05459797629127380780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-26334433699114678142013-10-26T23:09:19.816-07:002013-10-26T23:09:19.816-07:00Beautiful take on the emotions and perfectly execu...Beautiful take on the emotions and perfectly executed. Need I say more! Brilliant jobAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-1267173056737726702013-10-26T10:27:55.772-07:002013-10-26T10:27:55.772-07:00Very emotional composition. Loved it :) Very emotional composition. Loved it :) Rathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14621417958017949084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-34775992427605297952013-10-26T07:22:54.677-07:002013-10-26T07:22:54.677-07:00'Then why all of a sudden'... has a rhythm...'Then why all of a sudden'... has a rhythmic ring to it... loved the poem.<br /><br />Arvind Passey<br />www.passey.infoArvind Passeyhttp://www.passey.infonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-34340317737801690222013-10-26T06:47:51.900-07:002013-10-26T06:47:51.900-07:00As always very evocativeAs always very evocativevanderloosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15974007236500702721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-57742746576786258522013-10-26T05:25:30.579-07:002013-10-26T05:25:30.579-07:00I absolutely loved how you expressed every emotion...I absolutely loved how you expressed every emotion of the bride in such a simple manner.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10784280352825024998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-84450493460822929142013-10-26T05:09:12.565-07:002013-10-26T05:09:12.565-07:00loved your poemloved your poemthe factfictionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06676989097057485947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2054211292829265479.post-68327166143677213142013-10-26T00:52:09.506-07:002013-10-26T00:52:09.506-07:00A well composed poem. Wish you all the best for ...A well composed poem. Wish you all the best for the contest.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06682758228934966786noreply@blogger.com